what do u think
Posted Apr 27, 2013 by anonymous | 366 views | 4 comments
what do u think of my poem...[br]I sit on a hill under the clear blue sky[br]I was at my aunts house back in July [br]I watched as he talked with his marine corps friends[br]I watched as he laughed with a wide, wide grin[br][br]there he comes walking over to me[br]I can't bear not to blush [br]I can't bear not to smile[br][br]he sits next to me and begins to speak[br]I look into his pretty blue eyes, which make me weak[br]I watch as his dirty blonde hair brandish against the wind[br]my feelings... oh how I wanted to tell him[br][br]out of those soft tender lips I heard him say[br]he was being deployed the very next day[br]hearing these words made me all teary eyed[br]looked at me and said "do or die". (USMC saying)[br][br]I saw him dressed in his blues[br]looked down and saw that he had shined his shoes [br]a tear he had seen run slowly down my face[br]that one last look I had to embrace [br]I wanted to lean in and give him a kiss[br]because then I knew who I would miss[br][From Secret APP]
Commented Jul 7, 2013 by anonymous
You're on top of the game. Thanks for shianrg.
Commented May 6, 2013 by anonymous
That's 2 cevler by half and 2x2 clever 4 me. Thanks!
Commented Apr 29, 2013 by anonymous
it is a nice poem written by you.
Commented Apr 27, 2013 by anonymous
didn't mean to add [br] it out it up himself